@Ucdevs Some more grammar corrections. All recommended sentences are written "like this".
In Territory buildings:
The descriptions for Level 2 and Level 3 are ambiguous. I would rewrite them as follows:
"Level 2: Increases the quantity of each good for sale. (Upgrade does not add new items to buy or sell)". Note, that at the very least the expression "for sell or buy" is incorrect grammar.
"Level 3: Increases the total cash of the shop. (Upgrade does not add new items to buy or sell or quantity of each good)". Note, that at the very least the expression "for sell or buy" is incorrect grammar.
Tailor, Workshop, Lumber Mill, Food Stall, Smithy, Furnace. (info sections)
The descriptions of upgrades always say "Allows to produce". It should say: "Allows production of"
It's really unclear what Charity does (it sounds like experience for solving puzzles would increase). To clear up this, the descriptions should probably read:
(for example in Level 2)
"Charity: donate Gold Ingot for 250 XP"
Obviously this should increase for each level as appropriate (300 XP, 350 XP...)
For Sushi, Cup of coffee and Date Cake, the last sentence should say respectively
"If Cup of coffee and Date Cake not already used, Sushi can be applied up to once per puzzle."
"If Sushi and Date Cake not already used, Cup of coffee can be applied up to once per puzzle."
"If Sushi and Cup of coffee not already used, Date Cake can be applied up to once per puzzle."
For the Curry, the sentence is incorrect as stated (should remove 'up'). Correct sentence:
"Increases the chance to find an artifact to 100%".
To disambiguate what the capacity refers to, maybe the sentence should be
"Increases capacity of Warehouse by 50% of the original size."
In Adventure Guild sections:
There is a message that says "Big puzzle can be counted as few small ones." This is very awkward (and incorrect) English. My recommended fix: "Big puzzles can be counted as a few small ones." [Notice the plural on puzzles and the addition of 'a']
I would correct some of the lines to read as follows:
"Not counted categories: Unrecognized Masterpieces, Not Yet Approved".
"Do not switch to other puzzles while solving a puzzle", alternatively this is clearer if you say "Switching to another puzzle after beginning a puzzle, makes the first puzzle not count anymore."
"Results may be displayed with a delay of 3 minutes."
I would change the third section to say "You will have weapons that allow you to deal with puzzles much faster."
Thanks,
Kon